Example built from the before and after
October 17, 2026, typical sample
- Check:Every quote is really in the original
Ten facts listed before the rewrite.
- Check:Every row has something written in both columns
Five rows, each written in both columns.
- Check:No number was added or changed
Every number in the new version is in the original.
- Check:Each fact is marked kept, changed or missing
All ten facts are marked kept.
- Check:No number in the final version is new
Every number in the final version is in the original.
- Check:Every fact is still said and nothing was added
All ten facts are still said, and nothing was added; the cost is described as not yet priced.
- Check:It starts with what the reader needs and avoids words they do not know
It opens with what happened and what is needed, and no word like dry-in, look-ahead or OT is left.
- For your read:You read it as the reader would
Would the owner's representative know what she is being asked to decide, and does your contract say anything about telling her of a delay?
Fixed: Nothing needed fixing in this example: every check passed on the first pass.
Met 7 of 7, plus 1 for your read
1 check is for your read: the tool hands it to you.