Example built from the before and after
October 17, 2026, typical sample
- Check:Every quote is really in the original
Nine facts listed before the rewrite.
- Check:Every row has something written in both columns
Five rows, each written in both columns.
- Check:No number was added or changed
Every number in the new version is in the original.
- Check:Each fact is marked kept, changed or missing
All nine facts are marked kept.
- Check:No number in the final version is new
Every number in the final version is in the original.
- Check:Every fact is still said and nothing was added
All nine facts are still said, and nothing was added.
- Check:It starts with what the reader needs and avoids words they do not know
It opens with the dates and the place and ends with what to do; no shorthand such as rsvp or nov is left.
- For your read:You read it as the reader would
Would a new member of staff know when and where to go, and does the executive want this tone?
Fixed: Nothing needed fixing in this example: every check passed on the first pass.
Met 7 of 7, plus 1 for your read
1 check is for your read: the tool hands it to you.